Vash
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Post by Vash on Aug 8, 2003 2:09:48 GMT -5
tell me why i cry....
To be someone else? To not be alone anymore, to not care anymore, Tears come and go, yet i am enduring.
People in past told me, Lies and deceit. Who am i to belive? I listen to my heart pounding, whispers fall deaf around me.
My longing for someone, Leaves me aching inside. Wishing for the person, Who understands me best, To finally find me,
Am i forever? Forgotten, lost, abandonded. Right and wrong, are they just a idea? Forgive me, as i struggle, This world is a hole, Caving in on me..
This is a hashed together poem...thinking/reading into things too much for my own good...Enjoy, and let me know what you think...
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Post by SilantWanderer on Aug 8, 2003 2:14:24 GMT -5
Sad, but beautiful.
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Post by Lost Innocent on Aug 8, 2003 12:51:33 GMT -5
Very good poem, tis sad...but tis good.
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Post by SilantWanderer on Aug 8, 2003 13:18:14 GMT -5
You stole my word !!!!
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